Tuesday, September 29, 2009

Oh So Close!

In this ongoing saga of my night shoot with Brian (which is taking far too long!), I want to focus on how one problem can mess up a shot. What I liked about the shot: 1. Brian's bored "I'm about to go home" expression. 2. The directional lighting at camera left provided by a hot shoe flash shot through an umbrella. 3. The overall subdued earthy tones. 4. The out-of-focus twinkling lights behind his head. What I didn't like: 1. The out-of-focus twinkling lights behind his head. How can I both like and dislike the same thing? Look at how I composed the shot. The lights look like they're sprouting from his head. It really bothers me. Once again, this is a reminder of how important it is to be mindful of your composition.

1 comment:

basile with an e said...

you've gotten really good at lighting with your umbrella while i have not done anything. i'm way behind. you're good. good job.