The fact that this was taken with an iPhone cannot be used as an excuse. In fact, the "viewfinder" is giant compared to an SLR, so I should have got this right. This was taken over seven months ago and I like to think that I've improved my composition skills since then...but I'm not sure of that!
Tuesday, September 30, 2008
Critique: Poor Composition of Eric and Evan
This shot of Eric and his son Evan was very poorly composed. You can see that Eric's body is cut off while there's too much wall space on the right. There is also too much space above their heads.
The fact that this was taken with an iPhone cannot be used as an excuse. In fact, the "viewfinder" is giant compared to an SLR, so I should have got this right. This was taken over seven months ago and I like to think that I've improved my composition skills since then...but I'm not sure of that!
The fact that this was taken with an iPhone cannot be used as an excuse. In fact, the "viewfinder" is giant compared to an SLR, so I should have got this right. This was taken over seven months ago and I like to think that I've improved my composition skills since then...but I'm not sure of that!
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